Walker's Vale John Zelenski
James Cooper moved his family to Walker's Vale, Pennsylvania, in search of the ideal life. What he got was the just opposite. As this small town's eerie history is revealed and repeated, it's clear the devil is in the details and he's waiting for the Cooper's young daughter.
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The pungent smell of gasoline burned
quickly through my nostrils and settled
deep into my throat. Coughing to the
point of vomiting, I desperately fought to
keep myself above the fluid surrounding
me. On all sides as far as I could see, icy
golden liquid moved hypnotically in wavelike
patterns that crashed fiercely with each
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roll. The devastating sound of each swell, louder than
anything I could ever recall, pierced my ear drums as I
felt warm liquid flow from each ear. Now, in utter and
eerie silence I found myself alone in this demented sea
of chaos.
As I, again, brought my head to the surface, I began
to feel the waves calm, and the putrid smell was replaced
with an aroma of what can be best described as a sugary
mix of sweet bread and warm chocolate. The bitter
coldness of the liquid also began to warm to room temperature,
allowing me to float almost effortlessly in its
midst. Still unable to hear, I watched as two large cylindrical
pillars rose from the sea and ascended as far as I
could see into the red vapor atmosphere above me. In
the center between the columns rose a marble stairway
that was shaped much like a cubed maze in pattern.
From the very top there shone a reddish metallic light
that beckoned me to approach it. I couldn’t explain the
overwhelming desire to reach the light; I only felt that
somehow it was drawing me toward it. I lifted myself
from the watery pit and began to climb this maze, one
block at a time.
Higher and higher I ascended, until the yellow sea
below became like a small puddle. As I neared what
appeared to be the pinnacle, the light from above began
to grow dimmer, and the environment shifted once
again. A bitter cold wind blew from all directions at me,
as if some force was trying to throw me from the staircase.
Just as I was about to lose my grip, a small angelic
being lowered its tiny hand toward me; I desperately
grabbed on to avoid what would have been undoubt
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edly my death. As the being pulled me to the surface
where it stood, I could see that it was neither female nor
male by appearance and was eight or ten-years-old. It
had one of the most beautiful and otherworldly expressions
I had ever seen. Its beautifully formed face sparkled
with tiny beads of sunlight and its flowing bronze
hair seemed to float effortlessly above the shoulders.
I stood in its presence, awed by the majestic quality
it radiated. As it glided around me, guided by its
large powerful wings, the creature carefully examined
me from top to bottom. It hovered behind me for what
seemed like seconds, and without warning, the being
made contact by gently touching my ears. A sudden
rush of electricity flowed through me as I began to hear
childish laughter from behind. As I turned to face my
healer, the angelic entity began to transform before me
into a distorted, hideous monstrosity. It laughed at me
with an insane ferocity and lunged at me with pincher-like
claws, obviously trying to tear me into shreds. Thick
black smoke poured through the monster’s mammoth
fangs, which reeked of poisonous, decaying elements.
I yelled at the top of my lungs, “Jesus, help me
please!†in absolute desperation.
At once, the creature lunged backward and began to
twist its body into a serpent-like coil. It released a piercingly
loud howl as if in extreme torment while it continued
to writhe and convulse its body. With nowhere
to go, I decided the only way to escape the beast was
to jump off of the ledge. With the demon now disoriented,
I leaped from the edge back into the red mist
and fell swiftly through the haze, turning end over end.
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As I began to accelerate rapidly toward the liquid bottom,
I again was overcome with the intense smell of
gasoline. I tried to reach out to grab either of the pillars,
only to see them crumble into the sea below me. What
was before a shimmering yellow ocean was now a black
moving tide of insects and vermin. I could do nothing
to stop myself as I fell directly into the cavernous pit.
Spiders, centipedes, and other forms of bugs crawled
on and inside me until I could no longer breathe, and
I started to sink further into their abyss. I continued to
fall deeper while I gasped for some oxygen—helplessly
covered in crawling blackness. Until…
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